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Weep for Dead Heroes (Haiku) by Tascobar Death of a rock star
No more sound from your guitar
Choking on vomit
Up the ladder:
Ever Felt
Down the ladder:
that boy
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Posted: October 8, 2002 5:05 AM PDT; Last modified: October 8, 2002 5:05 AM PDTWeighted score: 5.0522184 Overall Rank: 6815 Comments:
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vulcan @ 80.242.3.31
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8-Oct-02/5:15 AM
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good!5(for I don't consider rock stars as heroes!but the poem is good otherwise!)
what no feedback no reverb. no syringe. perhaps an oatmeal cookie down the wrong pipe.
perhaps a ham sandwich?
Succinctly put. 7. I like the title and particularly the rhyming of the first and second lines; rare to see in a haiku.
Succinctly put. 7. I like the title and particularly the rhyming of the first and second lines; rare to see in a haiku.
ew.
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