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Weep for Dead Heroes (Haiku) by Tascobar

Death of a rock star No more sound from your guitar Choking on vomit

Tarquin De La Bog 9-Oct-02/3:23 AM
Succinctly put. 7. I like the title and particularly the rhyming of the first and second lines; rare to see in a haiku.




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