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that boy (Free verse) by nessness

that boy is my anthem my loud music my crazy dance. who cares what anyone else thinks! I'm having so much fun dancing in the road in the rain lungs filled with my favorite radio song. that boy smiles at me and joins me in the street bare feet on the sparkling pavement. who cares if we should be asleep! I'm having so much fun... that boy is my wild music my shower song, my insane tango. and boy, that boy can dance!

nentwined 16-Mar-02/1:21 AM
cool. =) I was really hoping it would end with something like "boy, that boy can dance!" =) I'd prefer how it read if the exclamation marks were question marks... not much else to say. cool. :)




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