| Re: Sugar Love by onlyontuesdays |
12-May-02/9:40 AM |
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"Too much" is not enough? "Too much" is precisely that quantity which is excessive. Apart from that splendid!
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| Re: How Strange by T. Becquerel |
12-May-02/8:52 AM |
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Despite the awful "Typical emotional waterfall" line, you managed to save face with a wonderful ending.
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| Re: High? Coo... by Modulo |
12-May-02/8:44 AM |
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Ohhhh "Whispering winds"... how beautiful. I docked marks because it's a Haiku and they are easy peasy lemon squeasy. And they suck.
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| Re: Cour by Cha no Onna |
12-May-02/7:25 AM |
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When you were young, maybe you could write poems. But you're a very old man now. I think you'd better have a lie down.
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| Re: Dammit by Cha no Onna |
11-May-02/5:34 PM |
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Ha ha! That was sure funny at the end.
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| Re: A New Day (v2) by nentwined |
11-May-02/3:20 PM |
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| Re: "The Buick", or, "to my grandfather" by david |
11-May-02/1:35 PM |
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Why do you hate the chair? Does it smell? Experiment.
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| Re: unoriginal by boogah |
11-May-02/8:11 AM |
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I think this poem was written in a kind of obsolete vernacular. Keep it up!
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| Re: Morning Glory by waltfreakinwhitman |
10-May-02/7:12 PM |
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| Re: Social Parody by skaskowski |
10-May-02/6:58 PM |
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Eggcellent use of the word 'bean'
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