on Sugar Love by onlyontuesdays
12 May 2002, 9:40 AM
"Too much" is not enough? "Too much" is precisely that quantity which is excessive. Apart from that splendid!
on How Strange by T. Becquerel
12 May 2002, 8:52 AM
Despite the awful "Typical emotional waterfall" line, you managed to save face with a wonderful ending.
on High? Coo... by Modulo
12 May 2002, 8:44 AM
Ohhhh "Whispering winds"... how beautiful. I docked marks because it's a Haiku and they are easy peasy lemon squeasy. And they suck.
on Cour by Cha no Onna
12 May 2002, 7:25 AM
When you were young, maybe you could write poems. But you're a very old man now. I think you'd better have a lie down.
on Dammit by Cha no Onna
11 May 2002, 5:34 PM
Ha ha! That was sure funny at the end.
on A New Day (v2) by nentwined
11 May 2002, 3:20 PM
Great work!
on "The Buick", or, "to my grandfather" by david
11 May 2002, 1:35 PM
Why do you hate the chair? Does it smell? Experiment.
on unoriginal by boogah
11 May 2002, 8:11 AM
I think this poem was written in a kind of obsolete vernacular. Keep it up!
on Morning Glory by waltfreakinwhitman
10 May 2002, 7:12 PM
Genius
on Social Parody by skaskowski
10 May 2002, 6:58 PM
Eggcellent use of the word 'bean'