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Member since 2001 · Posted 16 Mar 2002 · Edited 21 Aug 2002 · 5 comments

The bus stops shortly. Whispering winds breeze freely. My people go home.

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6 votes so far. Yours would make 7.6 votes so far

[n/a] T. Becquerel 16-Mar-02/1:21 AM Reply

I give a 9 or 10 for every haiku because they're short, easy to read, and difficult to write when compared with freeform.

[3] anonymous 11-May-02/10:07 PM Reply

Yes, I know you're a poet too, but I still want to speak to TuPak. NO DON'T PUT ME ON HOLD
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[1] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 12-May-02/8:44 AM Reply

Ohhhh "Whispering winds"... how beautiful. I docked marks because it's a Haiku and they are easy peasy lemon squeasy. And they suck.

[7] Robert K Foster 14-Aug-02/9:19 AM Reply

I suggest getting rid of the title. it takes away from your poem, and (traditionally) haiku are untitled.

[7] god'swife 21-Aug-02/11:43 PM Reply

Good 7/10 the title is bizarre