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High? Coo... (Haiku) by Modulo The bus stops shortly.
Whispering winds breeze freely.
My people go home.
Up the ladder:
this has happened more than a few times
Down the ladder:
Ramblings
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 4.5
Posted: March 16, 2002 1:18 AM PST; Last modified: August 21, 2002 10:46 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.865529 Overall Rank: 10330 Comments:
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T. Becquerel @
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16-Mar-02/1:21 AM
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I give a 9 or 10 for every haiku because they're short, easy to read, and difficult to write when compared with freeform.
Yes, I know you're a poet too, but I still want to speak to TuPak. NO DON'T PUT ME ON HOLD
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Ohhhh "Whispering winds"... how beautiful. I docked marks because it's a Haiku and they are easy peasy lemon squeasy. And they suck.
I suggest getting rid of the title. it takes away from your poem, and (traditionally) haiku are untitled.
Good 7/10 the title is bizarre
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