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High? Coo... (Haiku) by Modulo

The bus stops shortly. Whispering winds breeze freely. My people go home.

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 12-May-02/8:44 AM
Ohhhh "Whispering winds"... how beautiful. I docked marks because it's a Haiku and they are easy peasy lemon squeasy. And they suck.




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