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High? Coo... (Haiku) by Modulo

The bus stops shortly. Whispering winds breeze freely. My people go home.

Robert K Foster 14-Aug-02/9:19 AM
I suggest getting rid of the title. it takes away from your poem, and (traditionally) haiku are untitled.




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