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The meaning of Love

by The Slender Blade

Member since 2003 · Posted 29 Oct 2003 · 8 comments

What is this? An angel in heaven? No, this is love, From the skies above. My mother has left me, Departed, but not forgotten, I can accept closure, But not indecent exposure. I must understand, The way of things, After all, no one really knows, The way the wind blows. Life is like this, A kick in the teeth, But when a child cries, What can one surmise?

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8 comments

[10] ?-Dave_Mysterious-? 29-Oct-03/5:28 PM Reply
Wonderful. I was sincerely moved.
[5] kingit 29-Oct-03/5:57 PM Reply
I didn't move
[n/a] The Slender Blade › kingit 29-Oct-03/6:04 PM Reply
Perhaps you should open you're heart.
[5] kingit 29-Oct-03/6:34 PM Reply
that would hurt like a bastard!
[n/a] ==Doylum › kingit 29-Oct-03/6:40 PM Reply
oh yes if you took it literally it really would hurt wouldn't it!!!!11111
[6] Shardik 29-Oct-03/7:57 PM Reply
Gaut in the left tit?
[3] Wobble McFly 30-Oct-03/1:25 AM Reply
"I can accept closure,
But not indecent exposure."

These two lines are sheer genius. The rest is cack.
[2] nentwined 31-Jan-07/8:23 PM Reply
Wow. That really hurts. Well done?