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The meaning of Love (Free verse) by The Slender Blade What is this?
An angel in heaven?
No, this is love,
From the skies above.
My mother has left me,
Departed, but not forgotten,
I can accept closure,
But not indecent exposure.
I must understand,
The way of things,
After all, no one really knows,
The way the wind blows.
Life is like this,
A kick in the teeth,
But when a child cries,
What can one surmise?
Up the ladder:
To Mom
Down the ladder:
this has happened more than a few times
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Posted: October 29, 2003 5:25 PM PST; Last modified: October 29, 2003 5:25 PM PSTWeighted score: 4.865529 Overall Rank: 10328 The following users have marked this poem on their favorites list:
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?-Dave_Mysterious-? @ 163.1.234.221
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29-Oct-03/5:28 PM
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Wonderful. I was sincerely moved.
I didn't move
Perhaps you should open you're heart.
that would hurt like a bastard!
oh yes if you took it literally it really would hurt wouldn't it!!!!11111
Gaut in the left tit?
"I can accept closure,
But not indecent exposure." These two lines are sheer genius. The rest is cack.
Wow. That really hurts. Well done?
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