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A New Day (v2) (Free verse) by nentwined
a new day dawn day pearl blue-grey sway gentle sway
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.903226
Weighted score: 6.9014916
Overall Rank: 237
Posted: March 16, 2002 1:14 AM PST; Last modified: April 23, 2002 2:53 AM PDT
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Comments:
[0]... anonymous @ | 10-Jun-01/6:01 PM | Reply
feel like the repetition should have been continued in the sixth line.
[0]... anonymous @ | 16-Jun-01/1:20 PM | Reply
I like the sound of this one.
[0]... anonymous @ | 4-Apr-02/1:29 PM | Reply
drop the last 3 lines.
[10] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ | 11-May-02/3:20 PM | Reply
Great work!
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