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Free verse № 1632

Sugar Love

Member since 2002 · Posted 11 May 2002 · 2 comments

All I want is sugar love Even too much is not enough I could never tell you no So, sweet baby, put on a show Sugar never ever was so sweet As when your lips are touching me Sugar never ever was so good As when you love me how you should Sweet sweet kisses, sugar rush Show me I'm more than just a crush Touch me, tempt me, be a tease Have me on my hands and knees All I want is sugar love Even too much is not enough I could never tell you no So, sweet baby, put on a show Moonlight streams through the window Making every crevice glow Make me sweat, make me scream Follow me into my dreams All I want is sugar love Even too much is not enough I could never tell you no So, sweet baby, put on a show Touching, tempting, teasing me All you want to please me Tempt me, tease me all you like I could go on like this all night All I want is sugar love Even too much is not enough I could never tell you no So, sweet baby, put on a show

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[8] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 12-May-02/9:40 AM Reply
"Too much" is not enough? "Too much" is precisely that quantity which is excessive. Apart from that splendid!
[9] Sigh'ense... 9-Aug-02/4:01 AM Reply
This would make a saucy Janet Jackson song... Well done, and then some, Da1