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Out Doubt! (Free verse) by wlshepherd I cast you out!
No longer shall I tarry,
No more fey wanness,
No indecision,vacilliation, or cowardice.
No caprice.
I know exactly what I want,
I know how to get it,
Why I want it,
What I will do with it when I have it.
Everything is as clear as crystal.
I see everything now.
Up the ladder:
supply and remand
Down the ladder:
Angel
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Posted: May 17, 2002 5:05 AM PDT; Last modified: May 17, 2002 5:05 AM PDTWeighted score: 4.212706 Overall Rank: 13221 Comments:
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-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 131.111.245.180
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17-May-02/9:09 AM
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Do you? Do you really know what you want? That's not what mummy thinks.
what then, what do you want???
whjy wait to write this, who do you have to tell? why tease the reader?? what do you see that is this everything?????? is it still? (vacillation by the way)
There are words like vacillation and caprice and wanness, although I do not see how one can be fey and wan at the same time. Wacillation is spelt without an 'i'. I like this poem because for a change someone used the word "tarry". :-)
??? The original (and still often used) meaning of fey goes so well together with wan that it's almost a redundancy.
That's Vacillation sorry, typo
Shrouded in ambiguity, but the structure adds to its vague nature still remaining linear. I just hope for your sake, that 'Caprice' is merely imagery and not a reference to last months FHM.
large word cant save a poem - 5
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