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supply and remand (Free verse) by mogwai
As I lift my head from your golden shoulder, you say ?my life has no colour? but last night I saw you, delivering ha-ha's to clandestine comedians.

Up the ladder: Smile
Down the ladder: Out Doubt!

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.9230769
Weighted score: 4.212706
Overall Rank: 13220
Posted: May 13, 2002 5:28 AM PDT; Last modified: May 13, 2002 5:28 AM PDT
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Comments:
[1] webguy @ 216.34.217.190 | 12-Jul-02/4:00 AM | Reply
i dont get it "remand?'??
[5] deleted user @ 66.8.154.13 | 25-Jul-02/10:42 PM | Reply
don't get this one.
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