Re: Have you ever heard of William Carlost Williams 24 by notule	30-Jul-02/5:44 AM
Car"lost"? Car"bum" more like. No pun intended! lol!
Re: Hate Me by lucky_cmc	30-Jul-02/12:26 AM
I know you are, freak, but what am I?
Re: AIDS in a Glass by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	30-Jul-02/12:17 AM
Speaking of 'holding it in', have you read my recent masterpiece: The Turd To End All Turds?
Re: Hate Me by lucky_cmc	29-Jul-02/9:42 PM
Keep telling yourself that, freak.
Re: AIDS in a van by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	29-Jul-02/9:39 PM
You should be ashamed of your bum
Re: I Hate You by mytenderrage	29-Jul-02/6:08 PM
FUCKITY FUCK. The reply I have just written was lost by a powercut in a lightning storm. Hey, I might write a poem about lightning, because I don't think other people have experienced it, or if they have, that they have appreciated it in the way that I do, because I'm special. OK, let's get serious, twatsack. You have experienced certain emotions, which are undoubtedly 'real', but not 'true', since EMOTIONS ARE NOT TRUTH-BEARERS, and can therefore be neither true nor false. Writing about those emotions may be a therapeutically worthwhile activity. It is only a poetically worthwhile activity if one or more of the following statements are true: a) the emotions you have experienced are unique b) you are special c) you have written in an interesting, novel or otherwise wond'rous fashion I have said this already, but you seem to be slow on the pick-up: NONE OF THESE ARE TRUE. So the fact that you have written about real emotions does not justify your releasing your writings into the public domain. Now let's address some of the issues you have raised. Who cares what people think about your poem? Well obviously you do, since you have submitted it to a web site where it is periodically displayed to visitors for them to read it, score it and comment on it. You appear to be having difficulty grasping the ramifications of this action. If you post shitty poetry to a poetry ranking site, people will, by the medium of clicking '0' and typing rude words, TELL YOU IT IS SHIT. You posted it because you wanted to. That proves nothing, except that a purely private, therapeutic poem was posted against your wishes by someone else, or perhaps by yourself during a period of temporary insanity. I do not 'bitch' to everyone who writes about emotions: partly because a few have managed to do it in an interesting way, but mostly because I only bitch to those who, by their own actions, present their shitty work to me, like you have done. You can't 'be "cool" for [me]' simply by writing poetry that I like. You'd have to stop being the self-centred fucking moron you obviously are, but that's not going to happen. And you are a fucking whore.
Re: Signs and Wonders by timfowler	29-Jul-02/1:39 AM
Hi timfowler! I know we don't get on too well! I think it's because you're obsessed with the fact that you have read a quantity of 'modern' poetry and as such were rather dismayed when I described one of your pieces as 'olde'. But no matter! Have a great time on poemeranker! I don't know if this is a goood poeme. I couldn't be arsed to read it! lol! ASL!?!?!
Re: As single as I wanna be by hamgurl	28-Jul-02/9:16 PM
It's tough being rough.
Re: Bloody sins of mind by RosiePosie	28-Jul-02/9:15 PM
If you printed this and folded it into one of those four-lipped vulvae would it tell the future?
Re: Untitled by Popcicle	28-Jul-02/7:01 PM
Because she's a naive swooning tart.
Re: Farewell Song by jaalko	28-Jul-02/7:00 PM
Crap. Total crap. Crap. Crap. Complete god damned crap. My Christ this is some of the worst crap I've ever seen crapped. God in Heaven how did you come up with some crap? Serious fucking crap. Crap. How crap is this? Crap. Crap. Really quite crap. And it's crap.
Re: The train by Art Glocken	28-Jul-02/6:58 PM
This poem is so smug, cute, ironic, knowing, meta-ironic, useless, chummy and obvious I could puke. But instead perhaps I'll tug tug tug tug tug tug tug burst in white fury.
Re: The Way You Could Say Nothing (But still I understood) by frostygirl	28-Jul-02/6:33 PM
There once was a girl from Montana/Who liked to get off on bananas/But after a while/She had awful piles/Because she was putting the banana in the wrong hole the silly cow.
Re: The Price by Bluesee	28-Jul-02/6:32 PM
See 'Pants' by Settle for more information on dresses. You might also get some insane crap but what the fuck it looks like you could use some more material.
Re: CityClub by wolfgang	28-Jul-02/6:29 PM
So, basically, what you're saying is that you're part of an l33t subculture, no? GEE FUCK ME I WISH I WAS PART OF AN L33T SUBCULTURE. And because I don't think I can read any more of horus8's comment-based obscurities without generating some, closet dweezle did you know why did O Jesu what have I done?
Re: ~Witchcraft~ by Lenore	28-Jul-02/5:07 PM
I suggest: A scented wind wafting, embrowning the air / blew through the cheeks of soiled dispair
Re: Me and the Darkness by aurora	28-Jul-02/5:03 PM
I don't think this is a very good poeme. I especially like the fourth verse, in which you could only think of two lines so you just repeated them to make it four. Moreover, the whole piece is an utterly ridiculous attempt to appear 'deep' and 'troubled'. It's just a vague, teenage rambling about 'darkness'. No matter how hard you try, any poeme that tries to be 'dark' by using the word 'darkness' will fail. You fail.
Re: Rain by frostygirl	28-Jul-02/3:57 PM
I do believe you're a dunce.
Re: Truth of the Moon by ObiWonKn	28-Jul-02/8:29 AM
God damn it why does every third poem I read make absolutely no fucking sense? Lines like 'guarding our only truth' are the fastest way to Hell, my lad.
Re: Yes Sir by wolfgang	28-Jul-02/8:26 AM
Seriously chess isn't that hard to learn.