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Signs and Wonders (Free verse) by timfowler
'A guest preacher...introduced as Brother Teffeteller, stood up to preach the sermon. He was a short, stocky man with a glass eye. He took off his jacket and threw it to his wife sitting in the front row, then rolled up his shirt sleeves, as if he was looking for a fight. "Look at these here crosses." He gestured to the windows. "We're in the middle of the miracle here, and don't you doubt it."' London Daily Telegraph 8th February 1998 i) prophet There's a face in the light, rolling dawn searing backroad tumbledown, tumbleweed town. Brows knitted, close to twisted, closing eyes below faithless, abused, in plains glare. Pull down the blind: it is only the sun. ii) storyteller Coffee simmers behind him, ageless and revered, the steam rises, urgent in stillness, sunlight catching, flaring. He gazes past the table, smeared, recalling the mornings faded, gone. In the Church, in their restless rows gathered together, they wait, breath and breathless clutched, priceless relics in plastic boxes, their crosses gleam gold, sweat-sticky, in the glass. Clears his throat, stands, whispers amplified and swirling, dust suspended. Begins to speak, to sing his song, sweet melody on the ear, sweeter still the mind's decay, screaming. iii) miracle o lord are these the people who make church every sunday make the nut every payday make work every monday make love every friday who are healed made whole believed betrayed? iv) fingerprints Clear. There - don't you see? A child's mark, the hand placed so... and so, to record a passing through, a statement sworn and taken. Others linger in deep refractions: here a greased mark, there a palm slick with silver, quick-lime burnt pale skin dissolved, bleeding dust. Accusations, suspicion, dirt mounded heated words spark the dry earth, blaze out through the windows conjuring crosses in every pane.

Up the ladder: missing time
Down the ladder: TWO STAR WARS FANS

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.5384617
Weighted score: 6.1247053
Overall Rank: 1089
Posted: May 20, 2002 1:03 PM PDT; Last modified: May 20, 2002 1:03 PM PDT
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[7] deleted user @ 206.180.235.23 | 21-May-02/1:05 AM | Reply
Er, have you thought of posting these as separate poems? that would make commenting and voting a bit easier, especially since they vary so much in style. I'm going to vote/comment separately-
i) Love the wordplay, but the last line is kind of a letdown. I think it might be better without that line entirely. Still, an 8.
ii) 7.
iii)er, I don't quite get it. also, what do you mean by "make the nut"? 4.
iv) I like it, but I don't see how the last stanza relates to the rest of it. I do like the last stanza, it just seems to be about someting else entirely. 7.
[9] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 29-Jul-02/12:46 AM | Reply
now this.. this. this is rimbaud-morrison(jim) fucking super-candid voltair original. i'm even going to step out of my heckling mode for a sec and pat you on the ass. now get back to work before i read too much more plankton and not enough sharkfin. you are that fin, you are beak. you win the horus8 late night in the trenches fiasco. you get the golden Cue-tip. sleep wellh
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 217.39.149.1 | 29-Jul-02/1:39 AM | Reply
Hi timfowler! I know we don't get on too well! I think it's because you're obsessed with the fact that you have read a quantity of 'modern' poetry and as such were rather dismayed when I described one of your pieces as 'olde'. But no matter! Have a great time on poemeranker! I don't know if this is a goood poeme. I couldn't be arsed to read it! lol! ASL!?!?!
[9] deleted user @ 167.206.181.179 | 20-Aug-02/1:17 PM | Reply
very nice. reminds me of 2 things. wondering if you've read them: And the Ass Saw the Angel, by Nick Cave; and Lord of the Barnyard, by Tristan Egolf.
[10] Katie @ 63.212.187.1 | 30-Aug-02/5:50 PM | Reply
I would like to know what pathetic hypocrite, gave this a 0. This poem seems to express himslef in it. I my self think this is a great poem. You did good work Tim.
[8] Christof @ 195.172.133.226 | 3-Sep-02/2:03 AM | Reply
I don't see why the person who gave this a nought wa a hypocrite, if they really didn't like it. However, I like it, especially the ending when the ambivalence of Christianity becomes clear.
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