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Signs and Wonders (Free verse) by timfowler
'A guest preacher...introduced as Brother Teffeteller, stood up to
preach the sermon.
He was a short, stocky man with a glass eye. He took off his jacket and
threw it to his wife
sitting in the front row, then rolled up his shirt sleeves, as if he was
looking for a fight.
"Look at these here crosses." He gestured to the windows.
"We're in the middle of the miracle here, and don't you doubt it."'
London Daily Telegraph 8th February 1998
i) prophet
There's a face in the light, rolling
dawn searing backroad tumbledown,
tumbleweed town. Brows knitted, close
to twisted, closing eyes below
faithless, abused, in plains glare.
Pull down the blind: it is only the sun.
ii) storyteller
Coffee simmers behind him, ageless
and revered, the steam rises, urgent
in stillness, sunlight catching, flaring.
He gazes past the table, smeared,
recalling the mornings faded, gone.
In the Church, in their restless rows
gathered together, they wait, breath
and breathless clutched, priceless
relics in plastic boxes, their crosses
gleam gold, sweat-sticky, in the glass.
Clears his throat, stands, whispers
amplified and swirling, dust suspended.
Begins to speak, to sing his song,
sweet melody on the ear, sweeter
still the mind's decay, screaming.
iii) miracle
o lord
are these the people
who
make church every sunday
make the nut every payday
make work every monday
make love every friday
who are healed
made whole
believed
betrayed?
iv) fingerprints
Clear. There - don't you see?
A child's mark, the hand placed
so... and so, to record a passing
through, a statement sworn and taken.
Others linger in deep refractions:
here a greased mark, there a palm
slick with silver, quick-lime burnt
pale skin dissolved, bleeding dust.
Accusations, suspicion, dirt mounded
heated words spark the dry earth,
blaze out through the windows
conjuring crosses in every pane.
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.5384617
Weighted score: 6.1247053
Overall Rank: 1089
Posted: May 20, 2002 1:03 PM PDT; Last modified: May 20, 2002 1:03 PM PDT
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i) Love the wordplay, but the last line is kind of a letdown. I think it might be better without that line entirely. Still, an 8.
ii) 7.
iii)er, I don't quite get it. also, what do you mean by "make the nut"? 4.
iv) I like it, but I don't see how the last stanza relates to the rest of it. I do like the last stanza, it just seems to be about someting else entirely. 7.