zapevaj21 May 2002

Er, have you thought of posting these as separate poems? that would make commenting and voting a bit easier, especially since they vary so much in style. I'm going to vote/comment separately-
i) Love the wordplay, but the last line is kind of a letdown. I think it might be better without that line entirely. Still, an 8.
ii) 7.
iii)er, I don't quite get it. also, what do you mean by "make the nut"? 4.
iv) I like it, but I don't see how the last stanza relates to the rest of it. I do like the last stanza, it just seems to be about someting else entirely. 7.