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The train (Free verse) by Art Glocken delayed departure
chuff chuff chuff
chuff chuff chuff
chuff chuff chuff
chuff chuff chuff
chuff chuff chuff
chuff chuff chuff
chuff chuff chuff
chuff chuff chuff
delay.
another 20 minutes
chuff chuff chuff
chuff chuff chuff
chuff chuff chuff
chuff chuff chuff
arrive.
Up the ladder:
sweet dreams
Down the ladder:
sky
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Posted: July 28, 2002 5:15 AM PDT; Last modified: July 28, 2002 5:15 AM PDTWeighted score: 4.7777777 Overall Rank: 11330 Comments:
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Roisin @ 80.225.4.135
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28-Jul-02/7:39 AM
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Yeah!been there. A nice light-hearted outlook at the rail situation. Muine would have been more like F*&$%ng bl*&&Y Ba"??$%rd trains!
Top bombing!!!
This poem is so smug, cute, ironic, knowing, meta-ironic, useless, chummy and obvious I could puke. But instead perhaps I'll tug tug tug tug tug tug tug burst in white fury.
The work of My Glocken never fails to disappoint me. Such a talent - wasted. Reminisent of gazza
This is a rip off of 'the queue' by Nimrods Son...check it out sports fans....
how many chuffs when things go as scheduled? 4
cutesy!
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