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The train

Member since 2002 · Posted 28 Jul 2002 · 7 comments

delayed departure chuff chuff chuff chuff chuff chuff chuff chuff chuff chuff chuff chuff chuff chuff chuff chuff chuff chuff chuff chuff chuff chuff chuff chuff delay. another 20 minutes chuff chuff chuff chuff chuff chuff chuff chuff chuff chuff chuff chuff arrive.

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7 comments

[6] Roisin 28-Jul-02/7:39 AM Reply

Yeah!been there. A nice light-hearted outlook at the rail situation. Muine would have been more like F*&$%ng bl*&&Y Ba"??$%rd trains!

[10] Mister Cakes 28-Jul-02/8:00 AM Reply

Top bombing!!!

[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 28-Jul-02/6:58 PM Reply

This poem is so smug, cute, ironic, knowing, meta-ironic, useless, chummy and obvious I could puke. But instead perhaps I'll tug tug tug tug tug tug tug burst in white fury.

[3] The troubled sinner 29-Jul-02/5:41 AM Reply

The work of My Glocken never fails to disappoint me. Such a talent - wasted. Reminisent of gazza

[9] johnnyfontaine23 30-Jul-02/9:20 AM Reply

This is a rip off of 'the queue' by Nimrods Son...check it out sports fans....

[4] god'swife 24-Aug-02/1:04 AM Reply

how many chuffs when things go as scheduled? 4

[6] Jill Stockinger 27-Dec-20/4:52 PM Reply

cutesy!