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The train (Free verse) by Art Glocken

delayed departure chuff chuff chuff chuff chuff chuff chuff chuff chuff chuff chuff chuff chuff chuff chuff chuff chuff chuff chuff chuff chuff chuff chuff chuff delay. another 20 minutes chuff chuff chuff chuff chuff chuff chuff chuff chuff chuff chuff chuff arrive.

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 28-Jul-02/6:58 PM
This poem is so smug, cute, ironic, knowing, meta-ironic, useless, chummy and obvious I could puke. But instead perhaps I'll tug tug tug tug tug tug tug burst in white fury.




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