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The Way You Could Say Nothing (But still I understood) (Free verse) by frostygirl
Summer breeze
Whip through my hair
Cool warmth against my skin
Saw you standing there
A solitary figure
Outlined by the light of the setting sun
Shadows cast over your face
Hiding your expression
The way your shirt rustled in the wind
Loosely around your body
The way you silence sliced
Through the humid air
The way you could say nothing
But still I understood
Wind chimes
Hear them in the distance
Sweet, comforting sound
Saw you turn away
Slumped figure
Disappearing behind the tears
The memory of your ghostly presence
Trailing behind
The way you used to kiss me
Tingled through my lips
Wiped my single tear away
The way you left me standing there
Feeling so alone
The way you could say nothing
But still I understood
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Weighted score: 5.3073616
Overall Rank: 3610
Posted: July 28, 2002 12:28 PM PDT; Last modified: July 28, 2002 12:28 PM PDT
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