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Hate Me (Free verse) by lucky_cmc
You may hate me, yeah I really think you do. But why hate me when you don't know what's true. You can call me names and think that I won't respond, But really how can I not when you had everything all wrong. Yeah, you may say things that has no concern with you. But how can you be in my business and never know the truth. You see, you can hear things that will put you in the wrong. Like calling me a freak and other bad names, When you know you wouldn't want to be called the same. I'm comfortable with myself I don't have to say those things. I'm proud about who I am and that will never change. Until you are to keep saying the same things. The day of truth will come and you'll see what I mean.

Up the ladder: The Lost Laugh
Down the ladder: Just Being Me

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.4
Weighted score: 5.2
Overall Rank: 4546
Posted: July 25, 2002 3:52 PM PDT; Last modified: July 25, 2002 3:52 PM PDT
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Comments:
[5] pete @ 194.222.69.43 | 25-Jul-02/4:20 PM | Reply
... yeah ....right ! ... nice if done to a rap rhythm
[9] hamgurl @ 216.78.121.76 | 25-Jul-02/6:22 PM | Reply
I like that.You seem to have alot of built up anger in there.lol One day words won't be there to control that anger.lol
[6] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 25-Jul-02/9:38 PM | Reply
So pete likes rap, and you don't like cuss words? rap rythm? hate? try saying cunt whistle with your arses. rap is for muslims like john linde walker, and cussing is a beatiful way to be descriptive (if you wear a backwards baseball cap and listen to rap u must be prolific writers. i'm humbled.;ASLS..???
[5] emilys369 @ 66.188.240.202 | 26-Jul-02/12:37 PM | Reply
a very deep poem, but be careful cuz i think ur gonna blow up soon!
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 217.39.149.1 | 26-Jul-02/1:57 PM | Reply
freak
[n/a] lucky_cmc @ | 26-Jul-02/5:08 PM | Reply
[n/a] lucky_cmc @ | 29-Jul-02/6:41 PM | Reply
i will never be a freak
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 217.39.145.215 | 29-Jul-02/9:42 PM | Reply
Keep telling yourself that, freak.
[n/a] lucky_cmc @ | 29-Jul-02/10:04 PM | Reply
that is really very nice coming from the queen of freaks her self
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 217.39.145.215 | 30-Jul-02/12:26 AM | Reply
I know you are, freak, but what am I?
[6] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 30-Jul-02/1:21 AM | Reply
now i'm really going to bed...what a fuckin...nightmare. snore. goat. noose. middle finger.sock. bestfriend. yogurt.
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