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The Lost Laugh (Free verse) by Roisin
The Lost laugh. It skimmed the wind, Effortlessly expelled. Unmemorable in sound, It's feeling immortal. Absence hangs in the air, The unmentionable death. Now the lost laugh serves to choke.

Up the ladder: Digital Remembery
Down the ladder: Hate Me

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.4
Weighted score: 5.2
Overall Rank: 4494
Posted: July 9, 2002 11:58 AM PDT; Last modified: July 9, 2002 11:58 AM PDT
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[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 217.39.43.235 | 10-Jul-02/4:58 AM | Reply
I can relate to this poeme. I too felt immortal when I effortlessly broke wind.
[7] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 14-Jul-02/11:29 PM | Reply
It especially happens during fits of insomnia and infomercial overdose. has anybody checked the glove box?
[n/a] waltfreakinwhitman @ 192.193.196.9 | 16-Jul-02/2:48 PM | Reply
It's behind the couch. Next to the remote.
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