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Digital Remembery (Free verse) by ifni
capturing the transient in spinning light, the ones and zeroes of quantum meaning, capturing the fleeting flute of her voice on my spinning plastic disc. 9-9-01 JV

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.2105265
Weighted score: 5.200542
Overall Rank: 4544
Posted: March 16, 2002 1:14 AM PST; Last modified: March 16, 2002 1:14 AM PST
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[9] roses are read @ | 6-Apr-02/8:38 PM | Reply
hhmmm...i like this a lot a lot! you have a very interesting concept going on. could i suggest a change in line breaks though? maybe try this:
capturing the transient in
spinning light,
the ones and zeroes
of quantum meaning,
capturing the fleeting flute
of her voice on my
spinning
plastic
disc.
[6] nentwined @ 66.92.183.34 | 9-Jul-02/4:24 PM | Reply
hmm. ones and zeros are sort of the opposite of quantum, so far as I understand things. quantum is beyond fuzzy. beyond that, though, this is rather nice. :)
[8] x311 @ 63.227.192.5 | 8-Aug-02/7:42 AM | Reply
interesting look at the "art" of music in today's digitality. Makes you wonder about everything that's gone digital today. Has it lost feeling because it's all 1's and 0's now. You've struck my curiosity.
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