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zimp (Free verse) by calliope
mister fezzle flicked a fork across the arizona, fizzled like a sizzlin strip upon the upper mesa. felt his frown melt down his gown and drip upon his loafers. oh mister fezzle, flip the switch. and swizzle down the gophers.

Up the ladder: CHRISTMAS EVERYDAY
Down the ladder: death makes me vain!

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.75
Weighted score: 5.201706
Overall Rank: 4542
Posted: December 11, 2005 12:14 AM PST; Last modified: December 11, 2005 12:14 AM PST
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Comments:
[8] ALChemy @ 24.74.101.159 | 12-Dec-05/7:00 PM | Reply
Fo'shizzle.
[9] nentwined @ 64.60.192.131 | 13-Dec-05/5:13 PM | Reply
too much fun. makes me want 'Milk Cult' background.
[0] Edna Sweetlove @ 85.210.206.129 | 29-Aug-06/7:38 AM | Reply
total and utter garbage
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