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zimp (Free verse) by calliope mister fezzle flicked a fork across
the arizona,
fizzled like a sizzlin strip upon
the upper mesa.
felt his frown melt down his gown
and drip upon his loafers.
oh mister fezzle, flip the switch.
and swizzle down the gophers.
Up the ladder:
every moment will soon be memory
Down the ladder:
death makes me vain!
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Posted: December 11, 2005 12:14 AM PST; Last modified: December 11, 2005 12:14 AM PSTWeighted score: 5.201706 Overall Rank: 4541 The following users have marked this poem on their favorites list:
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ALChemy @ 24.74.101.159
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12-Dec-05/7:00 PM
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Fo'shizzle.
too much fun. makes me want 'Milk Cult' background.
total and utter garbage
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