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zimp

Member since 2003 · Posted 11 Dec 2005 · 3 comments

mister fezzle flicked a fork across the arizona, fizzled like a sizzlin strip upon the upper mesa. felt his frown melt down his gown and drip upon his loafers. oh mister fezzle, flip the switch. and swizzle down the gophers.

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[8] ALChemy 12-Dec-05/7:00 PM Reply
Fo'shizzle.
[9] nentwined 13-Dec-05/5:13 PM Reply
too much fun. makes me want 'Milk Cult' background.
[0] Edna Sweetlove 29-Aug-06/7:38 AM Reply
total and utter garbage