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Untitled (Free verse) by Popcicle
she blows a kiss near to him, he is her dream and raw ache, the cold knife felt beneath her skin. he lies of cool rain and sunny days, that will never come. how could she think this place of sad monsters, and frantic winds was a sweet beautiful rose?

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.181818
Weighted score: 5.090909
Overall Rank: 6188
Posted: July 8, 2002 4:28 PM PDT; Last modified: July 8, 2002 4:28 PM PDT
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[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 81.86.113.159 | 28-Jul-02/7:01 PM | Reply
Because she's a naive swooning tart.
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