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Green

Member since 2002 · Posted 26 May 2002 · 9 comments

Emerald hearts, green twilight Stone eyes lightly touch the edge, between seasons of the mind there is no thought only patience.

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[4] daniella 7-Jul-02/5:18 AM Reply

stone eyes lightly touch the edge, an oxymoron of a sentence. get a thread to lead images into one another. give up more of what you really see.

[6] Angel_of_fait 9-Jul-02/7:44 PM Reply

Very good makes u think you must like the color green or just feel this way...

[6] horus8 22-Jul-02/4:22 PM Reply

Well Tiamat for being a three headed dragon (female opposite of baphomet) on the thirty sixth level of the abyss your suprisingly tender

[n/a] tiamat 1-Aug-02/8:20 AM Reply

you know history, but not enough. go back all the way, and don't assume so much.

[8] razorgrin 1-Aug-02/8:33 AM Reply

Holy everything, that's beauiful.

[8] razorgrin 1-Aug-02/8:33 AM Reply

Holy everything, that's beautful.

[n/a] tiamat 1-Aug-02/8:45 AM Reply

it's about her, in a round about sort of way. I turned the beauty she inspired towards something I could write about, but it's her beauty in the core.

[8] razorgrin 1-Aug-02/8:49 AM Reply

so sweet.Check your email.

[9] little_big_nose 2-Jan-04/5:31 PM Reply

This is awsome, i really like it, you don't follow any 'rules' of poetry, which I love, good work