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Green (Free verse) by tiamat
Emerald hearts, green twilight Stone eyes lightly touch the edge, between seasons of the mind there is no thought only patience.

Up the ladder: lost at sea
Down the ladder: Untitled

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.181818
Weighted score: 5.090909
Overall Rank: 6187
Posted: May 26, 2002 5:02 PM PDT; Last modified: May 26, 2002 5:02 PM PDT
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[4] daniella @ 67.34.28.215 | 7-Jul-02/5:18 AM | Reply
stone eyes lightly touch the edge, an oxymoron of a sentence. get a thread to lead images into one another. give up more of what you really see.
[6] Angel_of_fait @ 209.33.176.48 | 9-Jul-02/7:44 PM | Reply
Very good makes u think you must like the color green or just feel this way...
[6] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 22-Jul-02/4:22 PM | Reply
Well Tiamat for being a three headed dragon (female opposite of baphomet) on the thirty sixth level of the abyss your suprisingly tender
[n/a] tiamat @ | 1-Aug-02/8:20 AM | Reply
you know history, but not enough. go back all the way, and don't assume so much.
[8] razorgrin @ 142.166.109.189 | 1-Aug-02/8:33 AM | Reply
Holy everything, that's beauiful.
[8] razorgrin @ 142.166.109.189 | 1-Aug-02/8:33 AM | Reply
Holy everything, that's beautful.
[n/a] tiamat @ | 1-Aug-02/8:45 AM | Reply
it's about her, in a round about sort of way. I turned the beauty she inspired towards something I could write about, but it's her beauty in the core.
[8] razorgrin @ 142.166.109.189 | 1-Aug-02/8:49 AM | Reply
so sweet.Check your email.
[9] little_big_nose @ 216.207.133.122 | 2-Jan-04/5:31 PM | Reply
This is awsome, i really like it, you don't follow any 'rules' of poetry, which I love, good work
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