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The Price (Free verse) by Bluesee
We reach so much it makes our arms ache Across electric miles we make the wires hum In frenzied typed-out words and thoughts we do communicate Until the din within The cables stretched does hum We read until our eyes grow dim Until a snotty film descends at 3 a m... Our eyelids droop under the glare of the electric din And unshakable haze while squinting through the cigarette smoke We try so hard to be so enigmatic We type and backslash and backspace over stuff We want to say but want it to come out just right But we won't see you In that pretty dress Tonigh

Up the ladder: My Mind
Down the ladder: My days work

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.1666667
Weighted score: 4.506941
Overall Rank: 12777
Posted: July 28, 2002 12:32 PM PDT; Last modified: July 28, 2002 12:32 PM PDT
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[3] pete @ 194.222.69.43 | 28-Jul-02/5:33 PM | Reply
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[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 81.86.113.159 | 28-Jul-02/6:32 PM | Reply
See 'Pants' by Settle for more information on dresses. You might also get some insane crap but what the fuck it looks like you could use some more material.
[5] [mojo] @ 195.92.168.169 | 19-Aug-02/12:13 PM | Reply
"Snotty film"?
[1] Jeremi B. Handrinos @ 24.126.116.54 | 9-Nov-03/5:52 AM | Reply
Whoops, a poem about puppy love and long distance turmoil? That's unheard of.
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