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My Mind (Free verse) by RWAndersen
My Mind has a way of seeing things, A way it would like them to be. Since this is so, You'd think I'd know, May not be as it seems to me. If my ears can hear what My Mind thinks it sees, I wouldn't have to wonder. So please, enlighten me! Your life has seen some horrible sad. A lot you'd change if it could be. Since this is so, You'd think I'd know, May not be a good time for me. Though you had no choice, you're now alone, And the first, ain't the best to be. Since this is so, You'd think I'd know, May not be possible for me. So I tell My Mind, only time will heal, And if it's meant too, it will be. Since this is so, You'd think I'd know, May not be you'll look beyond me. Again I will blink, and My Mind goes blind, And it's like I'd like it to be. Since this is so, I choose to know, It may not be hopeless for me.

Up the ladder: No Shoes 4 me, thanx
Down the ladder: The Price

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.1666667
Weighted score: 4.506941
Overall Rank: 12771
Posted: July 23, 2002 7:54 PM PDT; Last modified: July 23, 2002 7:54 PM PDT
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[6] horus8 @ 64.165.225.178 | 24-Jul-02/12:40 AM | Reply
hopeless has two definitions, platypus hocker, lipstick vandangler. take your pick
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