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No Shoes 4 me, thanx (Free verse) by bronzeNICKELchik
I do not like sneakers nor Hush Puppies Not pump peakers or those slipper guppies. I can't stand my trainers Can't TAKE those wooden clogs People that need shoes, lets face it, are a bunch of Lamers. Walk shuffling, sauntering about feels to me, like I'm under a layer of smog so thick, so heavy, I could, and will, SHOUT! Don't like the tacky platforms for i could simply fall off of the world! The natural way is to go no shoes and this comes to you from a nice and natural girl. But now I have gashes thicker then even my thickest eye lashes and some wounds that i highly doubt, would make anybody swoon. So now what is left other than those flip-flops? Oh man! With shoes, with messes, i will be forced to use a mop! I will think this over. I will make use of my Mary janes or my Clyde-Clovers! Sure I'll take those boots! Wrap ??m up! I want to be in style the next time a dude says, to me, "sup!"

Up the ladder: Chicken
Down the ladder: My Mind

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.1666667
Weighted score: 4.506941
Overall Rank: 12775
Posted: July 21, 2002 10:29 PM PDT; Last modified: July 21, 2002 10:29 PM PDT
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[7] Redfin @ 66.168.139.251 | 22-Jul-02/1:25 AM | Reply
Took some thinking to put this together, It's very different but I like it
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