| Re: rememberance of things past by keatsImnot |
19-Feb-03/3:40 PM |
Interesting that you decided to write about a remembrance of things past. Most people just ignore temporal limitations and dive straight into remembrances of future things. I'm jolly glad you made that clear in the title though, because otherwise I might have been rather confused. I can still remember the last time was rather confused. It was a week next Tuesday, and I had tried to blow my nose with a boiled egg.
P.S I'm afraid you have forgotten to remember the spelling of remembrance.
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| Re: THE WHEELCHAIR by Garrett S Sexton |
20-Feb-03/12:09 PM |
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Here's an interesting question for you, Garrett S Sexton: Do disableds have feelings? Or are they just soulless slabs of jellied meat with wheels attached?
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| Re: Your word's hurt, only you. by horus8 |
21-Feb-03/7:02 AM |
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| Re: THE POEMRANKER SEXCHART VERSION 1.2 FINAL by TanHand |
22-Feb-03/2:13 AM |
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How does this sex chart work? Do the lines indicate having had sex with someone? Is the having had sex with relation transitive?
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| Re: Drunk Satan by smlink84 |
22-Feb-03/7:00 AM |
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| Re: REALITY by NewbieMe |
22-Feb-03/11:20 AM |
This is an absolutely disastrous attempt at poetry. First of all, the title - REALITY - great way to drive home the REALISM of your piece with both alarming and shocking clarity! Oh wait, actually it's crap. "If I were in another place, I'd be there beside you" - would you? What if that other place wasn't BEside them, but INside them? Didn't think of that one, did you!? "If it could work out" - yeah the crucial word in this phrase is "If", because actually, disableds can't "work out". They're too lazy. Not to mention stupid. I think it's time you faced up to THAT little REALITY.
"If it was... but it was not" - ahhhhh but what if it actually WAS? Then your entire poeme would be a complete lie.
But overall, completely ace! 10/10!!!
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| Re: Suicidal thoughts by CrAzYlAdY Surukain |
24-Feb-03/12:15 PM |
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25-Feb-03/12:15 AM |
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Here I am!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!111111111
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| Re: More from unlucky janitors by Bachus |
26-Feb-03/11:27 AM |
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| Re: Clown of Misery II by nocturnalism |
28-Feb-03/4:50 AM |
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This is an epic work of true beauty. 10/10!!!!!!!!!!!!111111111
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2-Mar-03/3:31 PM |
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| Re: G-Spot Blues. by spank me baby yeah |
3-Mar-03/9:19 AM |
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| Re: For those who play with shit by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
3-Mar-03/9:28 AM |
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| Re: This Endless Soul by Ellie95 |
3-Mar-03/12:41 PM |
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This is the worst poem I have ever seen, and let me tell you, I've seen 'em all!!!!1
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| Re: Why I Hate Your Kids by vito0090 |
3-Mar-03/12:42 PM |
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If I had my druthers, everyone who used the phrase "if I had my druthers" would be stabbed in the groin and kicked down the stairs.
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| Re: Fetish Section by vito0090 |
3-Mar-03/12:48 PM |
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| Re: Scars by H0LL0WxL1F3 |
5-Mar-03/10:53 AM |
High school was tough for me, too. I really liked your poeme a lot, and found it very moving. Don't listen to immature loin bags like horus8 - just keep writing what you feel inside and tell others to shit off. Just be true to yourself. I have contemplated sewercide myself, usually when I'm feeling a bit depressed. I'd love to hear your comments on my poeme:
http://www.poemranker.com/poem-details.jsp?id=42580
Thanks for keeping it real. 10.
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5-Mar-03/1:13 PM |
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A good effort! Though the idea that anything of asian origin could bring with it a "welcome breeze of sweet escape" is both arrogant and racist. I shan't be recommending this piece to my many asian colleagues.
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| Re: Steel Wire Frame by celiff |
5-Mar-03/9:35 PM |
What have I become? I can't even say a mean thing about this poem because I think Settle probably wrote it. Settle probably writes half the overwrought bullshit on poemranker.
HAVING SAID THAT, HERE ARE SOME MISTAKES THAT YOU MADE.
1. Your heart is not a cage. It is a pump.
2. God is not protected. The idea of God being protected is a contradiction, since it implies that He could be in danger.
3. "To freely" is wrong.
4. Putting a comma after "My courage" is wrong.
5. Putting a comma after a motherfucking exclamation point is wrong.
6. Shut the fuck up.
7. It's "its", not "it's".
Thanks for your time! Your poem is awful.
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| Re: Sweet, Sweet... Daddy by Jeremi B. Handrinos |
5-Mar-03/9:39 PM |
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How fucking delightful! 4 for the poem, 5 for the charmingly witty and irreverent attitude, for a total of 9!!! (You earned it!!)
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