Re: Text Messages Sent by blueENDyellow	5-Mar-03/9:43 PM
Oh, real classy, deleting comments. IS THAT HOW YOU GO THROUGH LIFE? SIMPLY DELETING THE PEOPLE WHO GET IN YOUR WAY?
Re: need of love by bxjay170	5-Mar-03/9:49 PM
Excellent! With this poem you have really delved deep into the mysteries of the universe and come up much the richer! Also, I find your glib, willing need to define yourself by having an emotion toward another person sickening and naive! 10/10!!!
Re: Loud Taps by celiff	5-Mar-03/9:52 PM
Great! I love the way you take seemingly inert elements of nature and give them a vibrant personality! TOOT (Ten out of ten)!!!
Re: Unholy War by marvelis	5-Mar-03/9:53 PM
Good effort! 3!* * 0 ** ** 1 *** *** 0
Re: Forbidden Fruit by celiff	5-Mar-03/9:55 PM
Is this supposed to be profound or something? OH WOW LOL I GET IT THE SERPENT IS EVIL AND HE IS SUGGESTING THAT NUDAM AND EVE TAKE A BITE OF THE FRUIT! What is the point? Are you actually saying anything? This is truly the worst thing ever.
Re: Give Me A Chance by bxjay170	5-Mar-03/9:57 PM
This isn't a poem. It's the overflow of a hideously misconducted enema. Did your teacher tell you this was good? WELL IT'S A PILE OF SHIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIT. Thanks, I'll be here all week.
regarding some deleted poem...	6-Mar-03/7:30 PM
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Re: i will not come to bangladesh by lost in america	7-Mar-03/12:07 PM
A good try! But if you won't come to Bangladesh then that's racist. Apart from that, completely ace! I especially enjoyed the following: (i) Great use of random line breaks and indentation to make the piece seem more profound! (ii) Great use of lower case letters for the entire piece to make it look minimalist and deliberately understated! (iii) Excellent reminiscing about how you both got sloppy drunk one night; those were the days - carefree, young and free-spirited, and carefree, and free, and free, and young. What memories. What happiness. What originalty. (iv) Frankingstein is the name of the MONSTER. NOT the doctor who created him. It's a common misconception, and one you ought to consider before handing in your application for frozen justification.
Re: The Stand... an off rip by horus8	7-Mar-03/1:45 PM
Sucks, delete. Try writing some poems about the deafening silence that is living alone in the world or something. 9.
regarding some deleted poem...	8-Mar-03/4:57 PM
hahaha a dying rose talk about gutted how much more cliched can you get not much I'd say 10
regarding some deleted poem...	9-Mar-03/5:50 AM
If the aborted foetus is in heaven, then it is in the best place it could possibly be. It wouldn't be crying or unhappy, because then, by definition, it would not be in heaven. Therefore, if anything, the mother has done it a favour by aborting it before it had a chance to commit any sins such as not believing in Jesus Christ, or tossing a filled nappy out into the street, only to watch with horror has it lands, open, 'pon the unsuspecting face of a sleeping tramp. Unfortunately, The Bible is somewhat unclear on the fate of aborted foeti. If one were to cherish the notion of "original sin", then the foetus would not be "without sin" in the womb. Since it would be incapable of asking for Jesu's forgiveness (being merely a jellied foetus) one can only conclude that Jesu sends its soul to Hell. Assuming it has a soul. If it doesn't have a soul, then what's all the fuss about abortion about anyway? 10/10
regarding some deleted poem...	9-Mar-03/6:06 AM
Am I immature?
regarding some deleted poem...	9-Mar-03/6:11 AM
Great use of "won't" to rhyme with "don't" and "hurt" to rhyme with... "hard"!!!11
regarding some deleted poem...	9-Mar-03/6:16 AM
A good effort! At least you've demonstrated the strength of character required to avoid using the word "dawn" to rhyme with "yawn" in the last verse.
Re: War Begins on Tuesday by Nicholas Jones	9-Mar-03/6:22 AM
Do you agree with the following lines by a famous poete called Burgers: Is it war? It's insanity.
Re: To You (Please Critique and comment) by TrulyUnique0642	9-Mar-03/6:25 AM
Wow! You truly are unique! Ace poeme, by the way!
regarding some deleted poem...	9-Mar-03/9:47 AM
You wrote them both, you say? Then why did you comment on your own poeme!? Why did you say "At first I didn't like this poem, but then I read each word carefully and now I think it's beautiful. 10"? Were you trying to get other people to think it was good and popular? I think so. But don't worry. That's nothing to be ashamed of. Don't feel you have to justify your actions to me, or to anyone else for that matter. Apart from Jesu, obviously. COMMENT AWAITING DELETION... [100% Complete]
Re: Somme (A Horror Of War) by Mr Pig	9-Mar-03/2:17 PM
Dio has rocked for a long long time. Now it's time for him to pass the torch.
regarding some deleted poem...	10-Mar-03/8:49 AM
Great use of "9mm sword (semi-automatic)" as a metaphor for a 9mm semi-automatic handgun. As we all know, the purpose of using imagery in poetry is to take the poeme to beatiful places it wouldn't otherwise have any reason to go. You've really done that well by symbolising one semi-automatic weapon with another, completely different, semi-automatic weapon. "i pull the trigger of my sword" - utter genius. 10/10.
Re: good-bye kansas city: meditation #2 by poetandknowit	11-Mar-03/12:59 PM
Oh yeah whatever so I'm just supposed to open the box and let you in? You of all people should know that Nasdaq don't just provide a deliberate obligation to squeeze, without all the fuss of salivating oyster kernals and unfulfilled brag handles. There are other perks as well, you know. And we aren't talking about a total reversal of policy, here. Merely the odd boomerang thrown in to eliminate any overhead. Whether it's up to you or not is a matter for that cone to decide, because besides curtains and foundations, what more could a potential buyer ask for?