| Re: A Tale of Peter Pan by NewbieMe |
12-Mar-03/12:59 AM |
There once was some aids in a Newbie,
Who suckled it out of a Doobie.
In terror he cried,
"Oh no! I shall die!
And I've never seen any Boobies!"
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12-Mar-03/3:13 AM |
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| Re: UNTITLED by bxjay170 |
13-Mar-03/10:26 AM |
BEFORE YOU CONSIDER WRITING POETRY, TRY MASTERING THE ABILITY TO MASTER THE ABILITY TO WRITE COHERENT SENTENCES IN PLAIN ENGLISH. BECAUSE IF WE CAN'T EVEN DO THAT RIGHT, HOW CAN WE POSSIBLY HOPE TO TACKLE THE PROBLEM OF INFLATION? HOW CAN WE SOLVE EDUCATION? AND HOW CAN WE EVEN BEGIN TO DEAL WITH THE "COULDN'T CARE LESS" ATTITUDE THAT IS SO DEEPLY ROOTED IN THE FABRIC OF MODERN SOCIETY? I DON'T PRETEND TO HAVE ALL THE ANSWERS. I DON'T EVEN PRETEND TO WEAR UNDERPANTS.
DO YOU?
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| Re: Assassin Nation by Blue Magpie |
13-Mar-03/10:36 AM |
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Zoran Djindjic - such a poetic name.
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| Re: sexy by elizabethann |
13-Mar-03/10:47 AM |
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I like your use of the words "really sexy" to make the poeme seem really sexy. Also, great job throwing "scarred arms" in there. Poetry is always so much more profound when scars are involved. It's just that they're so deep, and so beautiful. Yes. You heard me. I said "beautiful". Because my scars ARE beautiful. They say more about me than Eminem ever could.
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| Re: Orders to My Zombie Legions by razorgrin |
13-Mar-03/8:28 PM |
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wait, are the grateful dead the zombies or the hippies?
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| Re: Scruffles by mmejido |
13-Mar-03/8:31 PM |
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WOW LOL STREAM OF CONSCIOUSNESS YOU REALLY BARE YOUR HEART AND JUST LET YOUR EMOTIONS FALL OUT I MEAN SO MANY PEOPLE COULD LEARN FROM YOUR EXAMPLE THIS IS A BEAUTIFUL PIECE AND IT MAKES ME CRY WITH HAPPINESS ABOUT HOW THE WORLD IS SO GREAT AND YOU JUST SAY THINGS IN SUCH A BEAUTIFUL, SIMPLE WAY YOU DON'T BEAT AROUND THE BUSH OR TRY TO MAKE THINGS MORE THAN THEY ARE YOU JUST TELL IT LIKE IT IS BUT THAT'S OK BECAUSE EVERYTHING HAS A TRUE INNER BEAUTY THAT FAR OUTSHINES THE FALSE BEAUTY CREATED BY INSINCERE POETS AND THEIR WEAVING OF WORDS YOU HAVE CREATED A REVOULTION IN POETRY AND MY HEART IS FOREVER YOURS
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| Re: At Least I Love You by Luv2write |
13-Mar-03/8:37 PM |
Beautiful. Simply beautiful. You have stolen my heart away with your pure, simple words. Who needs fancifications like "writing in a style that isn't identical to prose but with random line breaks" or "non-default choice of words" or "a basic understanding of poetry"?! Obviously not you! You are so special that you have an innate mastery of the essence of poetry without even needing to read any other poems! You're so amazing that the last three thousand years of poetry is rendered irrelevent by your challenging, breakthrough work!
LOOK YOU STUPID BINT: YOU ARE A STUPID BINT.
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| Re: Why I Chose My Name by mmejido |
13-Mar-03/8:38 PM |
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| Re: hard as a rock by <~> |
13-Mar-03/8:39 PM |
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| Re: Tears For You by mckenzie |
13-Mar-03/8:40 PM |
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REALLY? THAT'S GREAT NEWS! YEP. EXCELLENT! OK. OK. YEP. CHEERS. SEE YOU AT SEVEN THEN. OK. LOVE YOU. BYE!
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| Re: The day Pan out-played Apollo by Bachus |
13-Mar-03/8:41 PM |
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I'M SURE THIS MEANS SOMETHING.
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| Re: Maud, After the Death of her Daughter Lynn by middenHeap |
13-Mar-03/8:42 PM |
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ACES ANOTHER LOVE POEM! WELL GOLLY FUCKING GOSH I HAVEN'T SEEN ONE OF THOSE IN A WHILE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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13-Mar-03/8:43 PM |
I AM THE ONE THAT KILLED YOUR DAD
I AM THE EARLY MORNING KIT KAT
SEVENTY FOUR
SEVENTY FIVE
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14-Mar-03/12:02 PM |
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| Re: My friend by Luv2write |
14-Mar-03/7:51 PM |
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Wow! What a delicious twist in the ending! With these Fererro Rocher you are really spoiling us!
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| Re: What Do You Want From Me? by Bonehiss |
15-Mar-03/2:10 AM |
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I was going to leave a sarcastic comment about the gibbon simile, but I've "altered my consciousness" and it seems really scary.
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| Re: kiss by elizabethann |
17-Mar-03/6:38 AM |
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The boy who told you you almost gave him an orgasm by kissing his neck was lying, and you are a fool for believing him.
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| Re: Lover's Portrait by Dancer |
17-Mar-03/6:42 AM |
It's 'it's'.
It's 'Jesu'.
It's a pile of toss.
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17-Mar-03/6:50 AM |
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I could go through this and tell you point by point why this is awful. Do you want that? DO YOU WANT TO MAKE TROUBLE? BECAUSE I'LL PEEL YOU A TROUBLE SPUD IF YOU WANT IT
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