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Tears For You (Free verse) by mckenzie
When i first heard your voice i got weak, your words so soft and sweet. That moment was when i knew you were for me, forever and ever. Now that our life together has been going on, i feel closer to you and more in love. Your eyes and smile remind me each day, that nothing in this life is worth having with out you. I want to tell you every waking moment, that my heart aches for your love. Let you know every second of everyday, that i long for your touch. When that one day comes when god calls us home, ill still be in love with you even more than today.

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.0
Weighted score: 4.7615943
Overall Rank: 11570
Posted: March 12, 2003 11:49 PM PST; Last modified: March 12, 2003 11:49 PM PST
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[2] hipster flare @ 209.68.67.7 | 13-Mar-03/9:22 AM | Reply
craftless. try again.
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 131.111.8.102 | 13-Mar-03/8:40 PM | Reply
REALLY? THAT'S GREAT NEWS! YEP. EXCELLENT! OK. OK. YEP. CHEERS. SEE YOU AT SEVEN THEN. OK. LOVE YOU. BYE!
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