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Tears For You

by mckenzie

Member since 2003 · Posted 12 Mar 2003 · 2 comments

When i first heard your voice i got weak, your words so soft and sweet. That moment was when i knew you were for me, forever and ever. Now that our life together has been going on, i feel closer to you and more in love. Your eyes and smile remind me each day, that nothing in this life is worth having with out you. I want to tell you every waking moment, that my heart aches for your love. Let you know every second of everyday, that i long for your touch. When that one day comes when god calls us home, ill still be in love with you even more than today.

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[2] hipster flare 13-Mar-03/9:22 AM Reply
craftless. try again.
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 13-Mar-03/8:40 PM Reply
REALLY? THAT'S GREAT NEWS! YEP. EXCELLENT! OK. OK. YEP. CHEERS. SEE YOU AT SEVEN THEN. OK. LOVE YOU. BYE!