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Give Me A Chance (Free verse) by bxjay170 is earth really a good place?
look into my eyes and c my pain cauze u can' c it in my face
it seems i can get a job maybe cauze i look like a thug
even when i show u respect
u look at me as i was less then you
so i choose to sin to make money, shit what else can i do
all i ask is America can i get a chance
as i search the earth for the answers to fill in my heart's blanks...
Up the ladder:
We the destroyers
Down the ladder:
Sometimes Peace
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Posted: March 5, 2003 7:52 PM PST; Last modified: March 5, 2003 7:52 PM PSTWeighted score: 4.7615943 Overall Rank: 11634 Comments:
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-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 131.111.212.215
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5-Mar-03/9:57 PM
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This isn't a poem. It's the overflow of a hideously misconducted enema. Did your teacher tell you this was good? WELL IT'S A PILE OF SHIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIT. Thanks, I'll be here all week.
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