poemranker ::Give Me A Chance by bxjay170

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Free verse № 42680

Give Me A Chance

Member since 2002 · Posted 5 Mar 2003 · 1 comment

is earth really a good place? look into my eyes and c my pain cauze u can' c it in my face it seems i can get a job maybe cauze i look like a thug even when i show u respect u look at me as i was less then you so i choose to sin to make money, shit what else can i do all i ask is America can i get a chance as i search the earth for the answers to fill in my heart's blanks...

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[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 5-Mar-03/9:57 PM Reply
This isn't a poem. It's the overflow of a hideously misconducted enema. Did your teacher tell you this was good? WELL IT'S A PILE OF SHIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIT. Thanks, I'll be here all week.