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Give Me A Chance (Free verse) by bxjay170

is earth really a good place? look into my eyes and c my pain cauze u can' c it in my face it seems i can get a job maybe cauze i look like a thug even when i show u respect u look at me as i was less then you so i choose to sin to make money, shit what else can i do all i ask is America can i get a chance as i search the earth for the answers to fill in my heart's blanks...

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 5-Mar-03/9:57 PM
This isn't a poem. It's the overflow of a hideously misconducted enema. Did your teacher tell you this was good? WELL IT'S A PILE OF SHIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIT. Thanks, I'll be here all week.




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