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Free verse № 42679

Forbidden Fruit

Member since 2003 · Posted 5 Mar 2003 · 1 comment

Hissstory hass proven the love of your lord He won't mind I'm quite ss-sure. I'm S-sure it iss the sweetest fruit you will ever taasste. Go ahead, and pleasse take a bite.

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[0] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 5-Mar-03/9:55 PM Reply
Is this supposed to be profound or something? OH WOW LOL I GET IT THE SERPENT IS EVIL AND HE IS SUGGESTING THAT NUDAM AND EVE TAKE A BITE OF THE FRUIT! What is the point? Are you actually saying anything? This is truly the worst thing ever.