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Forbidden Fruit (Free verse) by celiff Hissstory hass proven the love of your lord
He won't mind
I'm quite ss-sure.
I'm S-sure it iss the sweetest
fruit you will ever taasste.
Go ahead, and pleasse take a bite.
Up the ladder:
Here I Go
Down the ladder:
Knowing love
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Posted: March 5, 2003 7:45 PM PST; Last modified: March 5, 2003 7:45 PM PSTWeighted score: 4.6821256 Overall Rank: 12126 Comments:
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-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 131.111.212.215
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5-Mar-03/9:55 PM
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Is this supposed to be profound or something? OH WOW LOL I GET IT THE SERPENT IS EVIL AND HE IS SUGGESTING THAT NUDAM AND EVE TAKE A BITE OF THE FRUIT! What is the point? Are you actually saying anything? This is truly the worst thing ever.
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