Free verse № 42025

Clown of Misery II

Member since 2002 · Posted 28 Feb 2003 · 3 comments

Eternal Laughter at your pathetic life Immortal hatred, I?ll cut you soul with this knife You thought I was just another victim of your deception But you never guessed you picked the wrong person I wield the mace of justice I will have my day of righteous vengeance Bow to me You rotting clown of misery My will is stronger My hate will conquer You tried to steal my heart to devour for your own pleasure But now the poisoned dart of hate will pierce you soul forever I want to see the fear in your eyes When I end your filthy life of lies Judgment day is near Your fate is here To my command you will be enslaved Watch my joy as you body decays Bow to me You rotting clown of misery My will is stronger My hate will conquer

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[7] Roisin 28-Feb-03/2:37 AM Reply

Needs a bit of work on the rythm just to make it flow a bit better. would sound pretty googd as a song-sort of range against the machine stylee typa thing!

[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 28-Feb-03/4:50 AM Reply

This is an epic work of true beauty. 10/10!!!!!!!!!!!!111111111

[0] razorgrin 28-Feb-03/9:42 AM Reply

This has got to be the lamest reject metal song since Twisted Wizard. Fabio Lione could totally kick your ass.