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cupid arrow (Free verse) by JustLin The day my eyes set on you
my heart beats like a drum
Longing to know you
but shy to approach you
The passion in your eyes
sparkles around me
the warm smile on your face
touches my soul
The feeling of touching you
tingles in my skin
The desire of kissing you
sets my heart on fire
The smell of cologne
liquefy my body
Cupid arrow, Cupid arrow
has speared my heart with love once again
Up the ladder:
Clown of Misery II
Down the ladder:
Drug for the Modern Man
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Posted: March 30, 2003 5:12 PM PST; Last modified: March 30, 2003 5:12 PM PSTWeighted score: 4.7615943 Overall Rank: 11592 Comments:
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deleted user @ 205.188.209.107
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31-Mar-03/2:59 PM
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lol, i think u could write something a little less cliche, but im really not1 2 judge, >6
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JustLin @ 202.166.126.229
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31-Mar-03/6:10 PM
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Tks for your comments
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