cupid arrow

Member since 2003 · Posted 30 Mar 2003 · 2 comments

The day my eyes set on you my heart beats like a drum Longing to know you but shy to approach you The passion in your eyes sparkles around me the warm smile on your face touches my soul The feeling of touching you tingles in my skin The desire of kissing you sets my heart on fire The smell of cologne liquefy my body Cupid arrow, Cupid arrow has speared my heart with love once again

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[6] deleted user 31-Mar-03/2:59 PM Reply

lol, i think u could write something a little less cliche, but im really not1 2 judge, >6

[n/a] JustLin › deleted user 31-Mar-03/6:10 PM Reply

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