Re: Gracy (An ode to my greyhound) by mindsigns	10-Aug-06/4:19 AM
Could have been better.
Re: 1a. Awaken by A db C	10-Aug-06/6:09 AM
I've read this a couple of times... but I feel this has to be presented better. You have good material, but somehow I don't find it very appealing. And P.S. welcome to Poemranker. Enjoy.
Re: The Pole and the Shadow by Dovina	18-Aug-06/9:57 AM
Very imaginative. Obedient to rules, accurate in every respect, shadows move under cars, lurk in alleys,......
Re: Visiting My Heart by drnick	18-Aug-06/10:04 AM
Cooool. You gave me an eerie feeling reading this. Somehow I felt like vampire was about when you say Outside the moon bleeds with white light and mystery and the sky remains black.
Re: Me 2, Nature 0 by rnuk	22-Aug-06/6:49 AM
I wouldn't say that this was very impressive although you were trying to get a point across.
Re: An All-American Fairy by Edna Sweetlove	22-Aug-06/6:51 AM
too prose-like.
Re: Watcher by creepshow	22-Aug-06/6:52 AM
too melancholy and depressing.
Re: Message sent by A_Dark_Calm	30-Aug-06/9:41 AM
I think the thirteenth line should read.. 'seem' instead of seemed. Apart from that.... it's beautiful. And welcome to Poemranker.
Re: Royal Blades by Dovina	4-Sep-06/12:59 PM
Hmmmmm , Nice scene..... and if only the poetry bunch could see her now? wow.
Re: From Across the Line by Dovina	5-Sep-06/6:12 AM
Wow D. Looks like you haven't come up with something really really good in a long time until now. Cheers.
Re: Once they were gliders. by half.italian	10-Sep-06/8:51 AM
What is this about? Maybe I am too tired... or this has no meaning. If the latter, kindly excuse me.
Re: Flood Land, East Kentucky by zodiac	13-Sep-06/3:09 AM
Hey, hey zodiac. Good to see you back. PR's been missing you.
Re: Doubt by Dovina	15-Sep-06/7:39 PM
D. Not very impressiveor. I've been reading this many times to come up with something constructive... but some how can't relate to it as you might like...sorry.
Re: Farewell, Kind Lover by Dovina	15-Sep-06/7:43 PM
This is much better than your previous post. Anybody I know?
Re: A Scientist’s Prayer by Dovina	10-Oct-06/12:41 AM
D... this piece could do with some editing. Sorry for no vote as I need to read this well. Don't know when I'll get the time for that. I've just scanned through and thought it needed fixing. Am having a whale of a time in the gulf. Terribly hot though... but it's fun. Will try to check in when I can.
regarding some deleted poem...	6-Nov-06/6:35 PM
teenborg, how come you vote for yourself?
Re: Dovina & Co by amanda_dcosta	6-Nov-06/6:50 PM
Hi everyone. Sorry for the silence, but I'm back now. Hope to see you all more often.
regarding some deleted poem...	8-Nov-06/1:04 AM
Stephen, you're pathetic. When will you ever stop.
Re: Three Worlds by Dovina	13-Nov-06/6:43 PM
D... It's surprising how you rhyme your lines. It's so unusual of you. Apart from that, its sad to see that PR is heart broken.
Re: Fifteen by Dovina	24-Nov-06/8:31 AM
hmmm. not bad. I have never climbed a pomogranate tree although we have 'em here. But I can say its a very tasty fruit.