Re: To Love One Another by Sunshine Conkey	24-Nov-06/8:37 AM
First of all, I see that you mentioned its someone else's poem. So, am not sure if I should grade it. Apart from that its a nice sentiment, very true, but with spelling errors.
Re: Bitter by Ranger	3-Dec-06/1:45 AM
Ranger... this is just too good. I read it a couple of times..but never got down to commenting. Sorry for the delay. Keep writing. You do a very good job at it.
Re: Instruction by Dovina	3-Dec-06/1:48 AM
I kinda wonder how you come up with the contents you write. Pretty good , I must say.
Re: And She Came Back by Enkidu	3-Dec-06/2:03 AM
Hmmm.. I think this could be shortened to contain less detail and more impact.
Re: Sonnet 5 (The Second Deluge) by Schlinkey	3-Dec-06/2:08 AM
I admire anyone who can write a beautiful sonnet, for this is something I have not achieved yet. You have done a swell job at it and hence I choose not to be too critical about its contents.
regarding some deleted poem...	7-Dec-06/5:42 AM
Great work Paul. It's quite a while since I read some of your work. Good to see this post.
Re: Self Portrait by Dovina	7-Dec-06/5:49 AM
Beautiful insight.
Re: Fanatic by Dovina	11-Jan-07/9:26 PM
Very well put. An idea well conveyed.
regarding some deleted poem...	11-Jan-07/9:31 PM
Very emphatic. A message well sent. A good write, Paul.
regarding some deleted poem...	11-Jan-07/9:33 PM
Sweet.
regarding some deleted poem...	11-Jan-07/9:35 PM
Could improve on this.
regarding some deleted poem...	11-Jan-07/9:37 PM
You had a nice idea conveyed in the beginning.. but it sort of gave way by the second half, kinda like it didn't hold together that strong.
regarding some deleted poem...	11-Jan-07/9:43 PM
Very good imagery here.
Re: Drowning by wilco	8-Feb-07/2:59 AM
When do we get to hear this piece of yours. Would love to. I like the style in most of your lyrics.
regarding some deleted poem...	8-Feb-07/3:04 AM
A good write.
Re: Flowers by Dovina	8-Feb-07/3:10 AM
Am I the only one to understand what you mean with all these flowers... dried or ascii. I'm happy to see this post and it gives me a nostalgic feel although the flowers are yours. Too bad that the string of ascii characters didn't come an angel's way, at least not yet.
regarding some deleted poem...	8-Feb-07/3:15 AM
Hi rockmage. I've seen your votes on my pages and thought you didn't seem to like my stuff. A zero on every poem. Am disappointed, but thanks for the attention.
Re: The Editor by Dovina	9-May-07/10:05 AM
Good imagery D. Happy to read one of your poems after a long time. Sorry for the negligence. Hope you are having a whale of a time on the road. Praying for your safety.
Re: Worn Ruse by drnick	9-May-07/10:10 AM
Bravo. Some psychological problem from how I see it and very well put. I like the phrase... Logic signs pass him by. You could do with an edit , but I think from one point of view, you've already made your point. Good work.
Re: A twisted Trail in Eden’s Garden by Dovina	18-May-07/5:38 AM
Hmmm.. lemme see. Quite a few points came to mind when I read this. First of all, I like the theme. Secondly, I like the similar syllables used like... suckered, sold and saddened... and verdict, vouched and valid. Thirdly... its very good imagery you've pictured there at the end, ie. the last two lines. Very emphatic. Good work.