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Re: orange crumble by impert&ent 3-Sep-05/10:03 PM
i can imagine this wall, i think i pass it often
Re: Stranger by MacFrantic 3-Sep-05/10:33 PM
when does he find time to get new fish?

i gave an eight just because that last part didn't flow to me
Re: Lessons(revised) by bellafuego 4-Sep-05/12:26 PM
word to that
regarding some deleted poem... 4-Sep-05/12:35 PM
i usually just throw those ones out, but now may consider alternate action
Re: Drinking Knowledge by gregsamsa222 4-Sep-05/9:19 PM
sculptuing and drawing go very well with tea, but i would agree with the ethics bit
Re: My Dad's Armchair. by Bethy 5-Sep-05/7:19 AM
i had the gd fortune to own one of my grandfather's old armchairs, it was the best place to be. simple things are good for writing and reading
Re: The Right Thing To Do by Bethy 5-Sep-05/7:25 AM
that was probably the right thing to do. definitely not the adventurous thing, but probably the right thing. the length of it suits the situation, but i am curious as to what was said for hours on end...
Re: this dude is the best by ay deee 5-Sep-05/7:46 AM
thank you bethy; i dont know why your comment was deleted, but yes we all know this dude, and may be a bit like him at times...
Re: self-observation in a chatroom with lack of sleep by nentwined 5-Sep-05/7:54 AM
monkey is my cheese!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Re: 575 by nentwined 5-Sep-05/7:59 AM
fuck yeah
Re: fire has its own logic by impert&ent 5-Sep-05/8:03 AM
many a night spent in the good company of fire and beer. bring your friends next time, too. i liked june 11 and quarter past ten in the midst of timeless reflections such as these.
Re: i was an ass by hendrimike 9-Sep-05/1:00 PM
hibernating lights!
Re: Keep Your Mouth Shut and Your Gun Loaded by wilco 12-Sep-05/9:36 PM
i like a short verse, but i don't know...
"makes" and "i'll have" make it a little off.
but i'm no stickler for grammar.
Re: My addict by Heather Dee 12-Sep-05/9:41 PM
i liked the first two stanzas better than the rest
Re: The Death of an Octopus by tianyi 16-Sep-05/9:34 AM
truly great sentiment
Re: No Aegis by wilco 2-Oct-05/8:54 PM
i can see gulls becoming bored with corpses, but i don't see the devils here.
Re: A Shortcut to Summer by Enkidu 4-Jan-06/11:28 AM
whilst all the pretty knives...
is a sweet line
Re: Half of All My Lies are True by Enkidu 4-Jan-06/11:30 AM
quite confused, and not connvinced by the rhymes
regarding some deleted poem... 4-Jan-06/11:42 AM
would have to agree about the pairing of adjecives. the last block containing the real message of the peice seems a bit too literal an explaination of your idea compared to descriptions in the first two. i despise the words "this society;" consider perhaps culture, age group, income level. you use such colorful words in the rest of the poem compared to "this society."
Re: Where the Hell Did I Put My Glasses? by Joe-joe 17-Jan-06/3:35 PM
a fantastic collection of images....


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