on My Dad's Armchair. by Bethy
5 Sep 2005, 7:19 AM
i had the gd fortune to own one of my grandfather's old armchairs, it was the best place to be. simple things are good for writing and reading
on The Right Thing To Do by Bethy
5 Sep 2005, 7:25 AM
that was probably the right thing to do. definitely not the adventurous thing, but probably the right thing. the length of it suits the situation, but i am curious as to what was said for hours on end...
on fire has its own logic by impert&ent
5 Sep 2005, 8:03 AM
many a night spent in the good company of fire and beer. bring your friends next time, too. i liked june 11 and quarter past ten in the midst of timeless reflections such as these.
on orange crumble by impert&ent
3 Sep 2005, 10:03 PM
i can imagine this wall, i think i pass it often
on Stranger by MacFrantic
3 Sep 2005, 10:33 PM
when does he find time to get new fish?
i gave an eight just because that last part didn't flow to me
i gave an eight just because that last part didn't flow to me
on Lessons(revised) by bellafuego
4 Sep 2005, 12:26 PM
word to that
on some deleted poem
4 Sep 2005, 12:35 PM
i usually just throw those ones out, but now may consider alternate action
on this dude is the best by ay deee
5 Sep 2005, 7:46 AM
thank you bethy; i dont know why your comment was deleted, but yes we all know this dude, and may be a bit like him at times...
on self-observation in a chatroom with lack of sleep by nentwined
5 Sep 2005, 7:54 AM
monkey is my cheese!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
on Drinking Knowledge by gregsamsa222
4 Sep 2005, 9:19 PM
sculptuing and drawing go very well with tea, but i would agree with the ethics bit
on i was an ass by hendrimike
9 Sep 2005, 1:00 PM
hibernating lights!
on Keep Your Mouth Shut and Your Gun Loaded by wilco
12 Sep 2005, 9:36 PM
i like a short verse, but i don't know...
"makes" and "i'll have" make it a little off.
but i'm no stickler for grammar.
"makes" and "i'll have" make it a little off.
but i'm no stickler for grammar.
on My addict by Heather Dee
12 Sep 2005, 9:41 PM
i liked the first two stanzas better than the rest
on The Death of an Octopus by tianyi
16 Sep 2005, 9:34 AM
truly great sentiment
on A Shortcut to Summer by Enkidu
4 Jan 2006, 11:28 AM
whilst all the pretty knives...
is a sweet line
is a sweet line
on Half of All My Lies are True by Enkidu
4 Jan 2006, 11:30 AM
quite confused, and not connvinced by the rhymes
on some deleted poem
4 Jan 2006, 11:42 AM
would have to agree about the pairing of adjecives. the last block containing the real message of the peice seems a bit too literal an explaination of your idea compared to descriptions in the first two. i despise the words "this society;" consider perhaps culture, age group, income level. you use such colorful words in the rest of the poem compared to "this society."
on Where the Hell Did I Put My Glasses? by Joe-joe
17 Jan 2006, 3:35 PM
a fantastic collection of images....