poemranker ::self-observation in a chatroom with lack of sleep by nentwined

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Haiku № 124744

self-observation in a chatroom with lack of sleep

Member since 2001 · Posted 3 May 2005 · Edited 13 May 2005 · 2 comments

life is craziness padded walls are imagined scream the stillness loose the bed was sent for but the patient refused it monkey is my cheese unbetterer gets be, that, and more; lines flesh out unobserved blending dit dit dit dit dit long dash long dash dit dit dit dit dit dit dit dit

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[7] Dovina 13-May-05/1:18 PM Reply
It slides downhill from the good first verse, as you no doubt intend. Get some rest!
[8] ay deee 5-Sep-05/7:54 AM Reply
monkey is my cheese!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!