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self-observation in a chatroom with lack of sleep (Haiku) by nentwined life is craziness
padded walls are imagined
scream the stillness loose
the bed was sent for
but the patient refused it
monkey is my cheese
unbetterer gets
be, that, and more; lines flesh out
unobserved blending
dit dit dit dit dit
long dash long dash dit dit dit
dit dit dit dit dit
Up the ladder:
End
Down the ladder:
Heart
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Posted: May 3, 2005 2:29 PM PDT; Last modified: May 13, 2005 12:49 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.806824 Overall Rank: 1684 The following users have marked this poem on their favorites list:
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Dovina @ 69.175.32.185
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13-May-05/1:18 PM
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It slides downhill from the good first verse, as you no doubt intend. Get some rest!
monkey is my cheese!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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