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self-observation in a chatroom with lack of sleep (Haiku) by nentwined

life is craziness padded walls are imagined scream the stillness loose the bed was sent for but the patient refused it monkey is my cheese unbetterer gets be, that, and more; lines flesh out unobserved blending dit dit dit dit dit long dash long dash dit dit dit dit dit dit dit dit

Dovina 13-May-05/1:18 PM
It slides downhill from the good first verse, as you no doubt intend. Get some rest!




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