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two (Free verse) by unknown^user
if there are men, then
there is also the man
he reads henry miller
and lies belly up in the salty water
trying to ignore
the pleads of the sun
propheteering ministers
and the chosen reincarnations
some are in awe, but most
simply buy the endorsed shoes
lower their voices, yielding
a new intonation
But he stands alone.
masturbating slowly to black
and white pictures hung on walls
concentrating on the symmetrical
the contours of the motionless
being careful not to be
hypnotized by the ghosts
he is a man, the man
wearing an invisible black cloak
sitting alone in a coffee shop
while groups of weak women
ponder loneliness, and again love
because love still seems a tangible paradise
But he is still the man.
self-made, but often hung-up
on politeness and modesty
give him the chance to walk on water
and he will just swim, inviting
you in, playfully splashing
only to bore of games, leaving a mark
But if he is still the man.
and in your home, the towels are still wet
but the sweat has not yet penetrated
pull out your henry miller, and strike
the long, precious conversation
going unnoticed into the sunset
for these are two
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Posted: August 1, 2004 10:57 PM PDT; Last modified: August 1, 2004 10:57 PM PDT
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