| Re: Where the Hell Did I Put My Glasses? by Joe-joe |
17-Jan-06/3:35 PM |
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a fantastic collection of images....
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| Re: Half of All My Lies are True by Enkidu |
4-Jan-06/11:30 AM |
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quite confused, and not connvinced by the rhymes
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| Re: A Shortcut to Summer by Enkidu |
4-Jan-06/11:28 AM |
whilst all the pretty knives...
is a sweet line
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| Re: a comment on i dream in nine minute increments by ay deee |
23-Nov-05/5:24 AM |
oh, ok.
i don't like the way capitalizing looks most of the time.
maybe it's word equality. monospace fonts are my favorite; monoheight letters look like they fit here...
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| Re: a comment on i dream in nine minute increments by ay deee |
22-Nov-05/2:55 PM |
first of all, no, my snooze button adds nine minutes to the alarm, so every time i push the snooze, i go back to sleep for nine minutes. as a result, my dream is fragmented...
and second, what is that song supposed to mean?
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| Re: a comment on not to settle for less than almost obliteration by ay deee |
18-Nov-05/8:51 AM |
you might be right
not the best for some cases, but as a coach pushes an athelete to perform, i also pushed my technique too hard in this particular instance
the 'it' of the second stanza refers to an object in the fire
unapt?
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| Re: a comment on not to settle for less than almost obliteration by ay deee |
15-Nov-05/1:57 PM |
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the thrill of pushing too hard being the theme, and letting something burn too long a specific instance of this.
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| Re: a comment on not to settle for less than almost obliteration by ay deee |
14-Nov-05/8:56 AM |
engaged in, causing, or encouraging the consumption of food, materials, or goods, especially in a wasteful or destructive way
that's pretty close, especially: materials, destructive
not speaking of tuberculosis
it is a great word, thank you
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| Re: a comment on a casting is rescued by ay deee |
12-Nov-05/2:48 PM |
an awfully dramatic safety manual.
I work as a sculptor in an old mechanical engineering building, circa late 1800s i think. 1930s would work too. it was one of the first buildings around here, and i don't think much maintainance has been done on the place over all. a sort of wierd inspiration in itself...
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| Re: a comment on a casting is rescued by ay deee |
12-Nov-05/2:45 PM |
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what do you dislike about carbonless?
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| Re: a comment on when i make sculpture by ay deee |
27-Oct-05/7:15 AM |
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thank you for the clarification, which one hangs down and which builds up?
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| Re: a comment on when i make sculpture by ay deee |
27-Oct-05/7:14 AM |
thank you, i would hope a poem about sculpture would offer that.
any in particular you enjoyed more than others?
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| Re: a comment on when i make sculpture by ay deee |
27-Oct-05/7:14 AM |
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sorry to disappoint, but perhaps i was looking for more of a tie back to the beginning rather than a climax. this seems to be a(problem?) theme in the writing i hae done lately. any suggestions?
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| Re: a comment on when i make sculpture by ay deee |
27-Oct-05/7:10 AM |
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thank you for the clarification, i do think my use of symbols is blatant (guns, genatalia, etc.)in some cases; people often get upset about it, but i suppose the symbol itslef is not blatant, just my use of it... thank you again.
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| Re: a comment on a fat man on the dock by ay deee |
25-Oct-05/8:22 AM |
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i know it doesn't really "fit," but am prone to doing things like that. desperate like jesus, i like that...
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| Re: a comment on a fat man on the dock by ay deee |
21-Oct-05/10:16 AM |
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i'm not sure of your meaning there, am i overly critical of mortal beings? or is there a specifc line or lines that i abuse?
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| Re: a comment on a skinny man on the dock by ay deee |
21-Oct-05/10:14 AM |
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apparently some ninjas use short stocky pieces of wood called mai poles to train on. they stand on and move about these to gain balace, agility, precision, etc.
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| Re: a comment on monday v2 by ay deee |
18-Oct-05/6:20 AM |
hold on.
what?
what about the words in this poem put a skirt on?
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| Re: a comment on a skinny man on the dock by ay deee |
18-Oct-05/6:17 AM |
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stealing is a moral decision. i am glad you like it. it is an abrupt ending, but i had hoped it to make one want to start again from the top. it could be its own stanza here i suppose...
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| Re: a comment on monday v2 by ay deee |
17-Oct-05/8:27 AM |
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