Re: a comment on monday v2 by ay deee	17-Oct-05/8:27 AM
are you sleepy? can you be specific? was the first version better?
Re: a comment on monday by ay deee	14-Oct-05/7:00 AM
thank you, i'll see what i can do...
Re: a comment on pep talk by ay deee	9-Oct-05/11:09 AM
thank you; it's like a self-inflicted cause you know, a hair shirt worn by someone with something to prove a discomfort for its own sake but i still don't understand what is lacking in the rest of the poem...
Re: a comment on sap's pay by ay deee	9-Oct-05/11:02 AM
in this poem, i did go for that rhyme pattern this is not my line of work visual art is my line of work, mostly sculpture writing is a roundabout way of sifting ideas for me but thank you for your consideration, and if you have anything constructive to say about my writing, i would greatly appreciate that sentiment as well. i was told by sculpture advisors to take my writing somewhere where people who knew things about writing could help (not sculptors).
Re: a comment on nicholson by ay deee	5-Oct-05/3:37 PM
right arm.
Re: a comment on pep talk by ay deee	5-Oct-05/3:37 PM
if you lost it, where would you find it, and what would you do to fill the void created by it's absence?
Re: a comment on pep talk by ay deee	5-Oct-05/3:36 PM
thank you kindly.
Re: a comment on pep talk by ay deee	5-Oct-05/3:36 PM
what's so good about up to and including hairy shirt? what's so bad about the rest?
Re: a comment on sap's pay by ay deee	5-Oct-05/3:35 PM
well... you're not so thick, you almost get it. so i'm not doing a shit job, but i am writing from the perspecitve of one who does a shit job and it's not so much the amount of money in the poem, but what is being done with it that is important. maybe you should deepen your definition of deeper.
Re: a comment on sap's pay by ay deee	5-Oct-05/3:34 PM
both. why do you ask?
Re: a comment on sap's pay by ay deee	3-Oct-05/7:51 PM
what don't you get?
Re: No Aegis by wilco	2-Oct-05/8:54 PM
i can see gulls becoming bored with corpses, but i don't see the devils here.
Re: a comment on nicholson by ay deee	29-Sep-05/8:03 PM
oh, sweet
Re: a comment on nicholson by ay deee	26-Sep-05/1:52 PM
what the hell is that?
Re: a comment on this has happened more than a few times by ay deee	18-Sep-05/10:09 PM
he must have lost interest, dude...
Re: a comment on loud clubbin by ay deee	18-Sep-05/10:07 PM
cutting a rug so thick: like dancing i'm dancing up such a storm that my legs disappear into the rug so i can't see my pants glad you enjoyed
Re: The Death of an Octopus by tianyi	16-Sep-05/9:34 AM
truly great sentiment
Re: a comment on this has happened more than a few times by ay deee	14-Sep-05/8:00 PM
and how is it insane, even if it is wrong?
Re: a comment on this has happened more than a few times by ay deee	14-Sep-05/7:34 PM
i must be missing something i don't see anything wrong with approaching a situation from different perspectives simultaneously in real life or in art
Re: a comment on the birds are bugs by ay deee	14-Sep-05/7:29 PM
more specific suggestions are always welcome but thank you for your vote