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monday (Free verse) by ay deee
today is the day
a fresh and sparkling start
had a good rest
dinner movie drinks
friends fire
dreams
last night i dreamt
i was drafted
i was unprepared
a mess of improper clothing
no tools
my sister got out of the truck
crying
and i hugged her
she walked around this house with me
suggesting what i needed
while i struggled to find it
i remember camo pants
but plaid shirt
my backpack sagging with a few worthless things
the enemy was already moving
in the streets
they knew we were in there
the sound of gunshots
the pulse of fear
i woke early and made
french toast and coffee
today is the day
a fresh and sparkling start
a new seat on my bicycle
i am prepared
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.8
Weighted score: 4.9761596
Overall Rank: 8374
Posted: October 10, 2005 7:02 AM PDT; Last modified: October 10, 2005 7:02 AM PDT
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I was drafted
and unprepared
Or something such. Nice job.