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Remember the Day (Free verse) by QuirkyWonder
The green of the grass brushes my cheek
As I lay in your bed and remember the day
The day the clouds covered the blue sky
When the heavens called down
And said for us to be together
The darkness of my heart I overcame
With your sparkling eyes and loveable smile
The blue of the ocean surrounds my body
As we shower together and remember the day
The day the sun burned my skin
When the heavens called down
And said for us to get married
The darkness of my soul I overcame
With a ring on my finger and a kiss on the cheek
The purple of the mountain bruises my body
As you lay in your casket and remember the day
The day my world collapsed
When the heavens called down
And said for you to be taken away
The darkness of my life I tried to overcome
With a memory in my heart a friend above
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Weighted score: 4.9761596
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Posted: May 1, 2004 9:02 PM PDT; Last modified: May 1, 2004 9:02 PM PDT
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