| Re: a comment on the birds are bugs by ay deee |
14-Sep-05/7:28 PM |
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and thank you for your vote
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| Re: a comment on the birds are bugs by ay deee |
14-Sep-05/7:26 PM |
i mostly like to give peeks into neat things
they are cicadas
but i'm not from around here
the lack of punctuation is an aesthetic choice
i would prompt another read
if you are troubled by it
and yes
there are many and varied interpretations
it just a peek of sorts
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| Re: a comment on the birds are bugs by ay deee |
14-Sep-05/7:21 PM |
"they have like a
voiliny sound to them"
a qoute
yalls dont worry bout that
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| Re: My addict by Heather Dee |
12-Sep-05/9:41 PM |
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i liked the first two stanzas better than the rest
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| Re: a comment on My addict by Heather Dee |
12-Sep-05/9:40 PM |
meerir=mirror
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teers
its dialect, i think
i get it
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| Re: Keep Your Mouth Shut and Your Gun Loaded by wilco |
12-Sep-05/9:36 PM |
i like a short verse, but i don't know...
"makes" and "i'll have" make it a little off.
but i'm no stickler for grammar.
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| Re: i was an ass by hendrimike |
9-Sep-05/1:00 PM |
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| Re: a comment on this has happened more than a few times by ay deee |
9-Sep-05/12:52 PM |
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eye contact is the life blood of interaction
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| Re: a comment on this has happened more than a few times by ay deee |
9-Sep-05/12:51 PM |
but what specifically abut the poem would lead you to that gunpoint conclusion?
=!!===-
//'
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| Re: a comment on keys by ay deee |
9-Sep-05/12:36 PM |
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| Re: a comment on the birds are still here by ay deee |
7-Sep-05/8:33 PM |
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| Re: a comment on this has happened more than a few times by ay deee |
6-Sep-05/8:27 PM |
insane? its just a poem.
please explain.
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| Re: a comment on this has happened more than a few times by ay deee |
6-Sep-05/8:26 PM |
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| Re: a comment on this dude is the best by ay deee |
6-Sep-05/8:25 PM |
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| Re: fire has its own logic by impert&ent |
5-Sep-05/8:03 AM |
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many a night spent in the good company of fire and beer. bring your friends next time, too. i liked june 11 and quarter past ten in the midst of timeless reflections such as these.
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| Re: 575 by nentwined |
5-Sep-05/7:59 AM |
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| Re: self-observation in a chatroom with lack of sleep by nentwined |
5-Sep-05/7:54 AM |
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monkey is my cheese!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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| Re: this dude is the best by ay deee |
5-Sep-05/7:46 AM |
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thank you bethy; i dont know why your comment was deleted, but yes we all know this dude, and may be a bit like him at times...
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| Re: The Right Thing To Do by Bethy |
5-Sep-05/7:25 AM |
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that was probably the right thing to do. definitely not the adventurous thing, but probably the right thing. the length of it suits the situation, but i am curious as to what was said for hours on end...
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| Re: My Dad's Armchair. by Bethy |
5-Sep-05/7:19 AM |
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i had the gd fortune to own one of my grandfather's old armchairs, it was the best place to be. simple things are good for writing and reading
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