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20 most recent comments by ay deee (41-60) and replies

Re: a comment on the birds are bugs by ay deee 14-Sep-05/7:28 PM
and thank you for your vote
Re: a comment on the birds are bugs by ay deee 14-Sep-05/7:26 PM
i mostly like to give peeks into neat things

they are cicadas
but i'm not from around here

the lack of punctuation is an aesthetic choice
i would prompt another read
if you are troubled by it

and yes
there are many and varied interpretations
it just a peek of sorts


Re: a comment on the birds are bugs by ay deee 14-Sep-05/7:21 PM
"they have like a
voiliny sound to them"

a qoute

yalls dont worry bout that
Re: My addict by Heather Dee 12-Sep-05/9:41 PM
i liked the first two stanzas better than the rest
Re: a comment on My addict by Heather Dee 12-Sep-05/9:40 PM
meerir=mirror
--
teers
its dialect, i think
i get it
Re: Keep Your Mouth Shut and Your Gun Loaded by wilco 12-Sep-05/9:36 PM
i like a short verse, but i don't know...
"makes" and "i'll have" make it a little off.
but i'm no stickler for grammar.
Re: i was an ass by hendrimike 9-Sep-05/1:00 PM
hibernating lights!
Re: a comment on this has happened more than a few times by ay deee 9-Sep-05/12:52 PM
eye contact is the life blood of interaction
Re: a comment on this has happened more than a few times by ay deee 9-Sep-05/12:51 PM
but what specifically abut the poem would lead you to that gunpoint conclusion?

=!!===-
//'
Re: a comment on keys by ay deee 9-Sep-05/12:36 PM
no janitor here
Re: a comment on the birds are still here by ay deee 7-Sep-05/8:33 PM
thank you very much.
Re: a comment on this has happened more than a few times by ay deee 6-Sep-05/8:27 PM
insane? its just a poem.
please explain.
Re: a comment on this has happened more than a few times by ay deee 6-Sep-05/8:26 PM
indeed
Re: a comment on this dude is the best by ay deee 6-Sep-05/8:25 PM
thanks for the tip(s)
Re: fire has its own logic by impert&ent 5-Sep-05/8:03 AM
many a night spent in the good company of fire and beer. bring your friends next time, too. i liked june 11 and quarter past ten in the midst of timeless reflections such as these.
Re: 575 by nentwined 5-Sep-05/7:59 AM
fuck yeah
Re: self-observation in a chatroom with lack of sleep by nentwined 5-Sep-05/7:54 AM
monkey is my cheese!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Re: this dude is the best by ay deee 5-Sep-05/7:46 AM
thank you bethy; i dont know why your comment was deleted, but yes we all know this dude, and may be a bit like him at times...
Re: The Right Thing To Do by Bethy 5-Sep-05/7:25 AM
that was probably the right thing to do. definitely not the adventurous thing, but probably the right thing. the length of it suits the situation, but i am curious as to what was said for hours on end...
Re: My Dad's Armchair. by Bethy 5-Sep-05/7:19 AM
i had the gd fortune to own one of my grandfather's old armchairs, it was the best place to be. simple things are good for writing and reading


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