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i was an ass (Free verse) by hendrimike
i don't remember the way she looked beneath me
hibernating lights patiently wait for day
i think the beer i had is in the bathroom
silly string sticking stiffly to her hair
bass thumps through the house
i hear them all laughing and singing
she croons to me in a private showcase
my room is so messy; i'm glad she's drunk
she doesn't notice my laundry situation
finishing up now and she stays the night
the pillow i give her is flat
and the lounge chair doesn't recline
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.2
Weighted score: 5.1430435
Overall Rank: 5406
Posted: August 25, 2005 6:46 AM PDT; Last modified: August 25, 2005 6:46 AM PDT
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