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i was an ass (Free verse) by hendrimike
i don't remember the way she looked beneath me hibernating lights patiently wait for day i think the beer i had is in the bathroom silly string sticking stiffly to her hair bass thumps through the house i hear them all laughing and singing she croons to me in a private showcase my room is so messy; i'm glad she's drunk she doesn't notice my laundry situation finishing up now and she stays the night the pillow i give her is flat and the lounge chair doesn't recline

Up the ladder: I think of you
Down the ladder: chlorinated

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.2
Weighted score: 5.1430435
Overall Rank: 5428
Posted: August 25, 2005 6:46 AM PDT; Last modified: August 25, 2005 6:46 AM PDT
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[8] bellafuego @ 199.77.249.2 | 25-Aug-05/10:59 AM | Reply
wow that's the kind of one night stand you can see on an abc drama.
[7] Bethy @ 24.222.32.230 | 25-Aug-05/1:15 PM | Reply
one nighters look just like that...lol :) Bethy
[8] ay deee @ 204.90.50.252 | 9-Sep-05/1:00 PM | Reply
hibernating lights!
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