chlorinated

Member since 2003 · Posted 31 Dec 2003 · 2 comments

stripped bare i stood quivering breathing the air sweaty and staggering rectangular sanctum in front of me offer the purity that autumn lacked so desperately wading through this mass anew i question my own motives for leaving you frustrated now i rise to the ground unfamiliar affections are overrated the pool is chlorinated

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[10] deleted user 1-Jan-04/10:17 AM Reply

he's back! fantastic! -10-

[10] daniella 28-Feb-04/7:55 PM Reply

excellent dawg