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chlorinated (Free verse) by ThePariahDog stripped bare
i stood quivering
breathing the air
sweaty and staggering
rectangular sanctum
in front of me
offer the purity that autumn
lacked so desperately
wading through
this mass anew
i question my own motives
for leaving you
frustrated now
i rise to the ground
unfamiliar affections are overrated
the pool is chlorinated
Up the ladder:
i was an ass
Down the ladder:
Las Vegas
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Posted: December 31, 2003 11:38 AM PST; Last modified: December 31, 2003 11:38 AM PSTWeighted score: 5.1430435 Overall Rank: 5429 Comments:
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1-Jan-04/10:17 AM
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he's back! fantastic! -10-
excellent dawg
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