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chlorinated (Free verse) by ThePariahDog

stripped bare i stood quivering breathing the air sweaty and staggering rectangular sanctum in front of me offer the purity that autumn lacked so desperately wading through this mass anew i question my own motives for leaving you frustrated now i rise to the ground unfamiliar affections are overrated the pool is chlorinated

daniella 28-Feb-04/7:55 PM
excellent dawg




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